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Task-2
Let's Learn from Others' Mistakes
Common Errors
1
Source: Mr Mohit 15-06-24 Day 19
Original Text
There is little room for doubt that in the contemporary world students have disruptive, violent and disrespectful demeanour regarding the school teachers.
Corrected
Errors:
- regarding the school teachers
Corrected version:
There is little room for doubt that in the contemporary world students have disruptive, violent, and disrespectful demeanour regarding school teachers.
Improved
Improved version:
It is unequivocal that in today's society, students frequently exhibit disruptive, violent, and disrespectful behaviour towards their educators.
2
Original Text
However, it has detrimental effects on the society and the youngsters, as listed below.
Corrected
Errors:
- on the society
Corrected version:
However, it has detrimental effects on society and the youngsters, as listed below.
Improved
Improved version:
Nonetheless, such conduct detrimentally affects both society and young individuals, as outlined below.
3
Original Text
Possibly the most prominent cause of students behaviour problem is the lack of their parental guidance.
Corrected
Errors:
- students behaviour problem
Corrected version:
Possibly the most prominent cause of students' behavioural problems is the lack of their parental guidance.
Improved
Improved version:
The predominant cause of students' behavioural issues is likely to be the deficiency of parental guidance.
4
Original Text
Most of the parents are busy in their economic and domestic activities, thus they do not take an active part in their adolescents life.
Corrected
Errors:
- Most of the parents
- busy in
- activities,
- adolescents life
Corrected version:
Most parents are busy with their economic and domestic activities; therefore, they do not take an active part in their adolescents' lives.
Improved
Improved version:
A majority of parents are preoccupied with their economic and domestic responsibilities, consequently failing to engage actively in their adolescents' lives.