Errors:  

- The process is about fruit packaging, not preparation.

Corrected version:

The picture illustrates the process of fruit packaging.

Improved version:

The diagram depicts the systematic process of packaging fruit.

Errors:  

- hand taking should be receiving

- dispatching of fruit should be fruit distribution

Corrected version:

Overall, the process consists of fourteen stages beginning with receiving and ending with fruit distribution.

Improved version:

The entire process encompasses fourteen stages, commencing with receiving and culminating in fruit distribution.

Errors:  

- hand picking should be receiving

- sent for transporting should be transported

- undergo a washing should be are washed

Corrected version:

At the beginning of the process, the first step is receiving, and then they are transported to a facility where they are washed.

Improved version:

The initial stage of the process involves receiving, followed by transportation to a facility for thorough washing.

Errors:  

- they check should be the quality is inspected

Corrected version:

After that, the quality is inspected.

Improved version:

Subsequently, a rigorous quality inspection is conducted.

Errors: 

- quality of checking should be quality inspection

- as send should be are sent

- cold storing should be cold storage

Corrected version:

When the quality inspection is complete, they are sent for cold storage.

Improved version:

Upon completion of the quality inspection, the fruits are transferred to cold storage.

Errors:  

- The sixth stage should be The next stage

- weighing of fruits should be fruit weighing

Corrected version:

The next stage involves fruit weighing.

Improved version:

The subsequent stage entails precise fruit weighing.

Errors:  

- it sent should be it is sent

- peeling of fruit should be fruit peeling

- will cuts should be are cut

Corrected version:

After that, it is sent for fruit peeling, after which they are cut into pieces.

Improved version:

Following that, the fruit undergoes peeling, and then it is precisely cut into pieces.

Errors: 

- slicing should be cutting

- then it sent should be then it is sent

Corrected version:

When the cutting is complete, then it is sent for packaging.

Improved version:

Upon completion of the cutting process, the fruit is subsequently packaged.

Errors: 

- canning fruit should be canned fruit

Corrected version:

After packaging, the next step is to seal the canned fruit.

Improved version:

Following packaging, the canned fruit is securely sealed.

Errors: 

- The last third step should be The final stage

- then store should be and then stored

Corrected version:

The final stage involves labeling the product and then stored.

Improved version:

The culminating stage entails meticulous product labeling, followed by secure storage.

Errors: 

- Finally should be Ultimately

- are packaged should be is packaged

- delivered to sold should be distributed to the market

Corrected version:

Ultimately, the fruit is packaged and distributed to the market.

Improved version:

Ultimately, the fruit undergoes packaging and is distributed to the market.