Errors:  

- illustrates, that have occurred

Corrected version:

The provided maps illustrate the information about changes that have occurred in a university campus in the given year from 2010 to the present day.

Improved version:

The maps illustrate changes in a university campus from 2010 to the present day.

Errors:  

ummistakeably, year

Corrected version:

Overall, the data unmistakably indicates that the improvements that have been made to the university campus over a 10 year period, show an increase in academic and recreational facilities.

Improved version:

Overall, the data unmistakably indicate improvements over 10 years, showing increased academic and recreational facilities.

Errors:  

- None

Corrected version:

Moreover, it is evident that the campus has undergone significant development and expansion, with new buildings and facilities being added.

Improved version:

The campus has clearly developed and expanded, adding new buildings and facilities.

Errors:  

-  None

Corrected version:

To begin with, in 2010, the campus consisted of four main buildings, the library, the administration building, the lecture hall, and the student union. Moreover, there was also a car park and sports field on the north and south sides of the campus, respectively.

Improved version:

In 2010, the campus had four main buildings: the library, the administration building, the lecture hall, and the student union. There was a car park to the north and a sports field to the south.

Errors:  

- large, south east

Corrected version:

Proceeding further, at the present time, the campus has transformed extensively. Moreover, the library has been extended to the east, while the lecture hall has been replaced by a new science building. Furthermore, the administration building has been enlarged and the car park has been transferred to the southeast corner of the campus, while the sports field has been divided into two sections, a football pitch, and a tennis court.

Improved version:

Currently, the campus has transformed significantly. The library was extended east. The lecture hall was replaced by a new science building. The administration building was enlarged. The car park moved to the southeast corner. The sports field is now a football pitch and a tennis court.