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globalisation

interlinking nation with a rest of the world

Corrected version:

There is little room for doubt that the need for globalization in a country is paramount today. The issue of interlinking nations with the rest of the world is quite controversial, as there are strong arguments for and against it.

Improved version:

There is little doubt that the need for globalization is paramount today. The issue of interlinking nations with the rest of the world* is highly controversial, with compelling arguments on both sides.

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- mindset

- priveleges

- myraid

- favour

Corrected version:

Different people have their distinct mindsets. To begin with, the first notion is that connection with the global world offers numerous privileges; there are myriad things to be shared in its favour.

Improved version:

Individuals hold diverse perspectives. To begin with, the primary argument is that global connectivity provides numerous privileges, and there are myriad points to support this view.

Errors:  

- The world wide integration

- importing technology

- a stereotyped methods

- earned a little amount

Corrected version:

First and foremost, worldwide integration plays a prominent role in importing technology. This means that a great many individuals depend on outdated methods to earn their livelihood. As a result, they only earn a small amount of money.

Improved version:

First and foremost, worldwide integration is crucial in importing technology. Many individuals still rely on outdated methods to earn their livelihood, resulting in low incomes.

Errors:  

- But

- Internationalisation

- employment opportunities

- helps to improve

- living standard of people

Corrected version:

However, the internationalization of business brings ideal employment opportunities, which helps improve the living standards of people and provides a sense of community.

Improved version:

However, the internationalization of business generates ideal employment opportunities, enhancing people's living standards and fostering a sense of community.

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- multnational

- come in contact

- state

- expand the contemporary knowledge

- ameliorate the productivity

- escalated the gross domestic production

Corrected version:

Furthermore, a large number of multinational companies collaborate with the state to expand contemporary knowledge and enhance the productivity of citizens. Consequently, it escalates the gross domestic product of the country.

Improved version:

Furthermore, numerous multinational companies collaborate with the state to expand contemporary knowledge and boost citizens' productivity. Consequently, this escalates the country's gross domestic product.

Errors:  

- globalisation

- economic scenario of single world culture

- created a political instability

- country

Corrected version:

Shifting towards the second school of thought, globalization has changed the economic landscape, leading to a single world culture, which has created political instability in host countries.

Improved version:

Shifting to the opposing viewpoint, globalization has transformed the economic landscape, fostering a single world culture, which has resulted in political instability in host countries.

Errors:  

- overuses

- creates a competitive spirit between them, which creates a worst situation of Deflation and varnish

- belongingnes

Corrected version:

Moreover, it overuses the natural resources of the host country and creates competition, leading to deflation and eroding a sense of belonging.

Improved version:

Moreover, it overuses the host country's natural resources and fosters competition, leading to deflation and eroding a sense of belonging.

Errors:  

- conclude

- seems to be that balanced interconnection

- essential for progress, with the amenities of the best

Corrected version:

To conclude, it seems that balanced interconnection between different countries is essential for progress, offering the benefits of improved employment opportunities and productivity.

Improved version:

To conclude, a balanced interconnection among countries appears essential for progress, offering enhanced employment opportunities and increased productivity.