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Source: Mr Raj Rishi 18-05-24 MT 43

Original Text

The process chart displays how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Overall, there is a five steps start from river water reserve into a dam and end with flow of water during pumping at night.

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Errors:  

- five steps start from river water reserve into a dam and end with flow of water during pumping at night

Corrected version:

The process chart illustrates how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Overall, there are five steps starting with the river water reserve in a dam and ending with the flow of water during pumping at night.

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Improved version:

The diagram details the five-stage process of electricity generation at a hydroelectric power station, beginning with the storage of river water in a dam and culminating in the nocturnal water pumping cycle.

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Original Text

Firstly, river water goes to the dam where flow water generate electricity during a day, water flows in downward direction. There are two reversible turbines which is used to generate electricity in the day time and at night it is used to pump water into high-level reservoir.

Corrected

Errors:  

- flow water generate electricity during a day

- which is used to generate electricity in the day time and at night it is used to pump water into high-level reservoir

Corrected version:

Initially, river water is directed to the dam where flowing water generates electricity during the day, moving in a downward direction. There are two reversible turbines which are used to generate electricity during the day and at night they are used to pump water into the high-level reservoir.

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Improved version:

Initially, the dam harnesses the river's current to produce electricity throughout the day, with water descending through two reversible turbines that also function to elevate water into the high-level reservoir at night.

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Original Text

A generator which helps to generate electricity with water, after that generated electricity reserved in a power station before supply it on power lines and then national grids.

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Errors:  

- which helps to generate electricity with water, after that generated electricity reserved in a power station before supply it on power lines and then national grids

Corrected version:

A generator helps to convert water flow into electricity, after which the generated electricity is stored in a power station before being supplied to power lines and then to the national grid.

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Improved version:

The generator converts the kinetic energy of water into electrical energy, which is then stored at the power station prior to distribution through power lines to the national grid.

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Original Text

At night the remain water pumped into low-level reservoir towards high-level reservoir with the help of turbines. The flow of water during pumping is upward direction at night.

Corrected

Errors:  

remain water pumped into low-level reservoir towards high-level reservoir with the help of turbines

Corrected version:

At night, the remaining water is pumped from the low-level reservoir to the high-level reservoir with the assistance of turbines. The flow of water during pumping is in an upward direction at night.

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Improved version:

During the night, turbines facilitate the upward pumping of residual water from the lower reservoir back to the upper reservoir for the next day's energy generation.

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Original Text

The process of intake water produce electricity works only in a day time only at night it is closed, and only pumped water process into high-level reservoir continues whole night.

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Errors:  

- intake water produce electricity works only in a day time only at night it is closed, and only pumped water process into high-level reservoir continues whole night

Corrected version:

The process of using intake water to produce electricity operates only during the daytime; at night, it is halted, and only the process of pumping water into the high-level reservoir continues throughout the night.

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Improved version:

Electricity production using water intake is exclusive to daylight hours, ceasing at night when the focus shifts to replenishing the high-level reservoir through continuous pumping.